Monday, March 27, 2006

D E S P E R A T I O N . . . . . . .

wel well.... as i ws sittn in class dis one day, s'posedly atttendin a ManPro lecture, kinda wz thinkn abt hw ma one frend wud commit suicide if he found out tht ne poem of his misses out on d rhymin scheme!! n thinkn f tht i kinda felt i neva botherd abt it eva...so ma 1st attempt to his share his desperation....cheers to ya...n booos to me !!!

D E S P E R A T I ON

"Flew away as it must,
leaving it all to dust."
Strangled and startled i lay,
Thinking of the price i had to pay . . . . .


Small as it might seem,
But it was all my dream.
Had plans umpteen pages,
Waited as i had to for ages.

Life was as it is, hard to cope,
And there i was,in search of a ray of hope.
Torn i turn to dope,
Even thought of the rope!


And then there it was, as if a fantasy,
Driving me to a state of ecstacy,
Pieces fell in place, as per ploy,
Tears roll down, infact, in joy.

Life was all shine and wine,
Yes, it was all mine and fine.
Craving for money and fame,
Heart and soul was all shame.

"The inevitable was bound to happen",
They say it out in the open,
As i'm thrown here and there,
I was blown out of air.

Glory and shine was all past,
It was all so fast,
As i lay astray and alone,
All open to nostalgia prone.

I see the past i lost,
I see the despair it cost,
Looking for a shoulder in pain,
I realize, there was never any gain.


"Flew away as it must,
Leaving it all to dust."
Strangled and startled i lay,
Thinking of the price i had to pay . . . . .

- Naveen Rahul


Well,der goes a blank attempt in vain....n here i swear not to jump into unknown waters again....neva again maaaan!!!

3 comments:

Tony Sebastian said...

hey never got here before...wonder who tht frnd of urs is ;)...very wel written mate though at some places it kinda seemd u wer strugglin for rhyme...very few though...gr8 work!!...but seriously its time to move on...

Anonymous said...

Am impressed once again....

Dr. Acula said...

it wasnt that bad naveen...though it was difficult to comprehend the idea of the poem...You must definitly try more of these "rhyming schemes" anywaY?...Who is that friend of yours?...I am also a hugely obsessive about rhyming schemes....